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Revision
Revision piece: Yours in Solitude
This piece is a revision of a poem titled: Social Butterfly. In this piece, it is formatted now to be a journal entry in which the writer, myself, explores feeling of not fitting in, inauthenticity, and solitude. This piece was created within my Writing Design and Circulation class.
Revision Piece |
I chose to revise a poem I wrote called, Social Butterfly. I changed the piece to be a journal entry in which I fully expressed all that I touched on in the poem, making it into a self-reflective entry depicting the story of feeling out of place at a party, driving home full of thoughts, and finally being alone, only to wonder if others feel the same as I do.
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